Monday, November 26, 2012

Dear John, Dear Coltrane by Michael harper


This was amazing; it kind of opened my eyes to how spiritually people can be. How small acts can mean more to them, these people hold themselves close to this church, but yet it seems to me that they have defied their spiritual believes and now they hold shame for it. (Lines 1-9) “Sex fingers toes, in the marketplace, near your father’s church in hamlet, north Carolina-, witness to this love, in this calm fallow, of these minds, there is no substitute for pain: genitals gone or going,” their love may have not been true, you notice in the first three words it doesn’t mention anything about love just about the act of sex and that it caused more pain than good, which I take it was suppost to take the pain away. But then three lines down it, says “witness to this love” now it’s just not sex its love and nothing will be able to change that right?

It seems that the man and the women, can conceive, (the lines 10, and 18) 10, “Seed burned out”18, “in mute change, the seed is gone” this man is in cable of having children, and it seems that the women is taking the blame for it. But it seems that there is a big difference in the families that one is of a higher stander in society and the other isn’t as high, I feel a lot of conflict right there between the author and the other people of the town, it seems like their love isn’t accepted by the higher people of society that they have. But this man, doesn’t seem to be bothered by it because I think he has been down to rock bottom, and he have “A love supreme” which is a spiritual experience that changed who he use to be, and now he’s getting back to regular life.

I loved this poem, it was wonderful.

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