Let's just start out with this; I LOVE Bob Dylan, so that explains the
choice easily. Now, the poem;
The second stanza, I adore it. It's a nice little picture being painted in
the lines. It has a fun bounce when you read over it, and the rhyming isn't an
excruciatingly blatant punch-to-the-face like it is in some other poems, it's
subtle, is nice, yes?
Easily, of the whole thing, I absolutely fell in love with the line in the
end of the second stanza; "And the
ancient empty streets too dead for marrying." Just the image of
that, decrepit streets rotting away under your feet, not an ounce of life
anywhere to be seen… Morbidly beautiful in its ways. I adore it, and the work
put in by Dylan. Though, for him it probably didn’t take that long (darn
talented lyricists, why must you taunt me so!?! GIVE ME YOUR POWERS)
Ahem. But in all seriousness.
Take me on a trip upon your magic
swirlin’ ship,
My senses have been stripped, my hands
can’t feel to grip,
My toes too numb to step, wait only
for my boot heels
To be wanderin’.
Ah, curse you, Mr. Dylan, and your Mr. Tambourine Man. Curse your lyrical
abilities that I have longed for for years of my life. Curse you.
The words are beautiful in their ways, giving pleasant (if you could call it
pleasant) imagery with every hop-skip-and-jump, with every little detail.
Perhaps it’s just me, but I could actually see the ship, bobbing in the water,
the deck hand (Our dear Mr. Dylan) gripping onto the side as the waves crash
against the ship, waiting for his legs to gather strength again, for his boots
to move.
Then take me disappearin’ though the
smoke rings of my mind,
Down the foggy ruins of time, far past
the frozen leaves,
The haunted, frightened trees, out to
the windy beach,
Far from the twisted reach of crazy
sorrow.
Again, images. The entire work sends images burning through my mind like
nobody’s business. His work is just… Spectacular to me. Can you picture it? The
cold day, the smoke rings disappearing into the fog? The dying, twisted and
mangled trees and the cold, abandoned beach, hiding away from the pains of the
world, keeping themselves safe, for what little safety is worth in this world.
Then again, considering the time it was written, I could just be completely
overdoing this and it may just be one giant drug trip.
Maybe I need to sleep on this one.
Maybe you just need to smoke on this one. (Too far?)
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty lengthy poem. It almost seems like a song. My view on this poem is that some people listen to music to get away from problems or even help deal with them. Maybe the speaker wants music because it helps. " Then take me disappearin' through the smoke rings of my mind" (line37), the music gets him thinking. I view the speaker as a boy learning new things through music. He sees himself in different shoes, a different perspective with every song.
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